In this episode, SW Millar (also on episode 58) returns with a new scene from his short story, “A Thief’s Magic.” Shane and Jeff discuss using dialogue tags, making sure the reader has cinematic awareness of the scene, emotional pacing, and communicating characterization through choices the characters make.
You can find more of SW Millar’s writing at https://swmillar.com/.
Also, download a free copy of the finished version of The Thief’s Magic today here: https://wondrous-maker-6982.ck.page/de613458f2
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