This week on the podcast, Jeff and V.E. Griffith work through a piece together. They talk about making sure the reader gets all the details they need, using body language to show more emotion, writing in a 3rd Grade child’s voice, and when to use a summary.
V.E. Griffith’s podcast is Revision Wizards and you can find it here https://revisionwizards.com
If you would rather watch Jeff and V.E. Griffith work together, check out the episode on YouTube: